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Aim for "Shazam" in your writing by being lean and impactful. This avoids reader fatigue and ensures your point is understood quickly. 2. Describing Physical Action
Forgive yourself for "failure" and frustration. Writing is a process that involves constant revision, and a harsh critique is often just a "Dark Forest" moment before your voice emerges.
In technical or academic writing, "Slammed the door and left" is a sentence fragment because it lacks a subject. Ensure your "slams" are grammatically complete unless used intentionally for stylistic voice. 3. Handling Critical Feedback Slammed
Use the The Writing Practice to turn criticism into a living document for improvement. To Anyone Who's Been Slammed by a Writing Teacher
Good writing answers the reader's questions before they ask them. Adopt a "skeptical" lens toward your own work to ensure every point is robust. Aim for "Shazam" in your writing by being lean and impactful
Instead of vague descriptions, use action-oriented language. For instance, replace "he was angry" with "he slammed the door" to make the scene pop.
If your writing has been "slammed" by a teacher or peer, it is important to separate the critique from your identity as a writer. Ensure your "slams" are grammatically complete unless used
Use the action of slamming to convey emotion without explicit dialogue. A character slamming a door behind them can replace an unnecessary "he said angrily".
“The problem is that the game’s designers have made promises on which the AI programmers cannot deliver; the former have envisioned game systems that are simply beyond the capabilities of modern game AI.”
This is all about Civ 5 and its naval combat AI, right? I think they just didn’t assign enough programmers to the AI, not that this was a necessary consequence of any design choice. I mean, Civ 4 was more complicated and yet had more challenging AI.
Where does the quote from Tom Chick end and your writing begin? I can’t tell in my browser.
I heard so many people warn me about this parabola in Civ 5 that I actually never made it over the parabola myself. I had amazing amounts of fun every game, losing, struggling, etc, and then I read the forums and just stopped playing right then. I didn’t decide that I wasn’t going to like or play the game any more, but I just wasn’t excited any more. Even though every game I played was super fun.
“At first I don’t like it, so I’m at the bottom of the curve.”
For me it doesn’t look like a parabola. More like a period. At first I don’t like it, so I don’t waste my time on it and go and play something else. Period. =)
The AI can’t use nukes? NOW you tell me!
The example of land units temporarily morphing into naval units to save the hassle of building transports is undoubtedly a great ideas; however, there’s still plenty of room for problems. A great example would be Civ5. In the newest installment, once you research the correct technology, you can move land units into water tiles and viola! You got a land unit in a boat. Where they really messed up though was their feature of only allowing one unit per tile and the mechanic of a land unit losing all movement for the rest of its turn once it goes aquatic. So, imagine you are planning a large, amphibious invasion consisting of ten units (in Civ5, that’s a very large force). The logistics of such a large force work in two extreme ways (with shades of gray). You can place all ten units on a very large coast line, and all can enter ten different ocean tiles on the same turn — basically moving the line of land units into a line of naval units. Or, you can enter a single unit onto a single ocean tile for ten turns. Doing all ten at once makes your land units extremely vulnerable to enemy naval units. Doing them one at a time creates a self-imposed choke point.
Most players would probably do something like move three units at a time, but this is besides the point. My point is that Civ5 implemented a mechanic for the sake of convenience but a different mechanic made it almost as non-fun as building a fleet of transports.
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