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"Her teeth chattered like a typewriter, and her breath emerged in small, ghostly puffs of frost." 3. Varied Sentence Structure
Instead of saying "He was scared," describe the physical signs of fear. "She was very cold." 11.part2.rar
"The fog was a thick, gray blanket, swallowing the trees whole." 2. Show, Don't Tell "Her teeth chattered like a typewriter, and her
Be careful with there/their/they're and where/wear . "Her teeth chattered like a typewriter
Use more than just periods and commas. Try to include a question mark , exclamation mark , or ellipsis (... ) .
"'Run!' he screamed, but it was already too late."
